One of my pre-occupations is the cycle of novels that I wrote concerned with what I think I learned in life. It is set in the American Civil War and called "Strike the Tent." Why? If I knew why perhaps I could have set it in some other time and place. I have been writing at this for a long time. In one of the books, there is the story of a French professional soldier (John Balthazar), an officer with much service in Africa, who is sent to America to "observe" Lee's army for his government. Once here, he becomes ever more involved until he ends by being asked to form a provisional battalion of infantry from men nobody else knows what to do with. Line crossers, men from broken units, disciplinary problems, etc. He sets out to do that. In this passage we see his battalion going into Winter Quarters in November, 1863 south of Culpeper. Virginia. They have just made a long withdrawal to the south, away from the disastrous field of Rapahannock Station. Pat Lang
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"Throughout the army, soldiers started to construct their winter quarters. They had lived so long in the forest that they could build solid little houses of sticks and mud if they had a couple of weeks in which to work. Small towns arose in the woods. They filled up the forests that sloped away to the northwest from the foot of Pony Mountain. Smoke drifted in the wind, eddying and streaming, bringing an acrid bite of wood taste in the air. Oak and hickory, maple and poplar, the smoke brought the smell of their little communities so like those their ancestors had made in the beginning of their new life in America. The men thought of Thanksgiving; some reached out beyond that to remember Christmas. Balthazar watched his troops build their winter town. He had never seen soldiers do such a thing. In Europe, soldiers on campaign lived under canvas or in requisitioned houses.He thought their skill a marvelous thing, and told them so.
On the 26th they had Thanksgiving. Smoot and Harris explained the nature of this feast to Balthazar, telling him of the memory of God's providence to the colonists at Jamestown.He heard them out, and sent hunting parties into the woodland.
Jubal Early came to dinner. He sat on a saw horse in the barn where they ate, a tin plate of venison and wild turkey in one hand, a tea cup of whiskey beside him.
The troops sat in the hay eating happily.
Balthazar had taken charge of the cooking, supervising the half dozen Black cooks that Harris recruited in Hays' brigade. The day the cooking started, Harris was pleased to have several men volunteer to help. Among them was Smith, the "D" Company commander. After watching his creation of an admirable kettle of turkey soup, Balthazar was sure that Smith, like Harris, was professionally trained.
Early complimented them on the stuffing, and said he had never had anything quite like it. He accepted a second helping. He had a chaplain with him, a French Jesuit who worked in the military hospitals in Lynchburg.
The priest and Balthazar chatted in their own language during dinner. The men listened to this with interest, turning from one to the other, examining their commander, seeking assurance of something they could not name.
After dinner, the priest offered his thoughts on the meaning of such a remembrance in wartime and the injustice of the war being waged against them by the North.
The soldiers listened politely.
When the chaplain finished his talk, Early stood up and announced that General Ewell was gone on sick leave for his old wound, and that he would be in command of Second Corps until Ewell came back. He said that they would be attached for now to corps headquarters.
You could see from the soldiers’ faces that they were not sure if that was good or bad.
The priest offered to say Mass if there were Catholics present. A number raised their hands and he moved off to a corner of the barn with them. Balthazar asked Early if he wished to attend the service. After a moments thought, the general shrugged and said he could not see any reason not to do so. "After all," he said, "the Pope has taken note of us." After Mass, the Jesuit asked if Balthazar wished him to hear his confession. The answer was no.
A courier came at four o'clock the next morning with the news that Meade was across the Rapidan, and marching southeast through the Wilderness.
Balthazar had found among his men a soldier who had been a bugler in a regular U.S. cavalry regiment. "Reveille" sounded sweet and compelling in the darkness of the camp."
Pat Lang
You're writing a cycle of novels? Good for you! Hope to see them in print very soon.
Posted by: Leila | 23 November 2006 at 01:10 AM
Happy Thanksgiving Col. Lang, thank you for posting this.
Happy Thanksgiving to all!
Posted by: taters | 23 November 2006 at 09:03 AM
This excerpt is very promising. You've got a lovely command of prose rhythm and the ability to shape mood without pointing. When do you expect any of this will be published?
Posted by: Larry K | 23 November 2006 at 10:28 AM
Thanks -- this was fun to read-- & happy Thanksgiving. Curiously, I spent the day writing about the French in Mexico, roughly the same period. Good luck with your novels.
Posted by: C.M. Mayo | 24 November 2006 at 12:24 AM
didn"t see any of them in Amazon but saw quite a few refs to w. patrick lang in other's books.
amazon has a feature where you can look at excerpts in books. quite a few coloroful quotes. the col. speaks quite directly.
Posted by: will | 24 November 2006 at 08:12 AM
Col - Great snippet, I really enjoy the premise of the Balthazar character (Did he serve in the Foreign Legion in Africa by any chance?). Be sure to let us know when this goes to print!
Posted by: Mt | 27 November 2006 at 04:14 PM
Wonderful post, Pat. The final draft of the 2nd novel in the cycle that you recently sent me are a wonder, too.
Happy Thanksgiving to all.
Posted by: Maureen Lang | 26 November 2008 at 12:36 PM
You'd think a former lit. teacher could at least proof her comment for subject/verb agreement (hurriedly leaving to go out to lunch with your neice is NOT a good excuse). Completed reading that draft yesterday & it "is" an absolute wonder.
Looking forward to another Keith Rocco cover for it.....?
Posted by: Maureen Lang | 26 November 2008 at 07:01 PM
OK I'm getting off my duff to order this for my own Christmas present. Culpepper, Lynchburg - these are towns I know, my mother's ancestral turf. Beautiful spare language. I look forward to reading these this Christmas.
Happy Thanksgiving, all.
Posted by: Leila Abu-Saba | 27 November 2008 at 12:04 AM
Maureen
Thanks again. I am going ove it again. Never happy with the text... An author's disease. Yes. I have arranged to use another of Rocco's paintings, the one above that shows a Union army regimental band in camp. I like to think of it as representing a scene in camp just before the copening of the Overland Campaign.
Leila
Thank you. pl
Posted by: Patrick Lang | 27 November 2008 at 08:52 AM
My greetings, Sir.
As a Frenchman (and I preemptively apologize for any linguistic mangle I could make), I am interested by your choice of a compatriot, even a fictional one, as a protagonist. "Battle Cry of Freedom" by MacPherson, quite the only reference book on the civil War having reached our shores, doesn't mention anything of the sort.
In any case, after enjoying your informed comments for the last months, it is extremely pleasant to enjoy as well your writing skills.
I wish you and all the commenters a happy Thanksgiving.
Posted by: Sebastien | 27 November 2008 at 09:25 AM
All
Someone here chsracterized the Jamestown Massacre of 1622 as a legitimate reaction to foreign invasion, etc. Such a description is of course anchronistic since the Indians did not think of themselves as a "people" defending a national territory. More importantly, I think it is wrong to ever justify mayhem wrough upon civilian populations on the basis of some "higher good." Most of you would not justify settler outrages in that way, (advance of civilization, reprisal, etc.) You should not justify Indian outrages. Murder is murder no matter who commits it. The same thing applies to events of the present day. The US and NATO have used far too much aerial firepower in places like Afghanistan. As a result we are seeing Karzaidemand and end to that and an end to the war. That does no tmean that I am in favor of denying fire support to troops actually in contsct in a fire fight. Some judgment must be employed in this. pl
Posted by: Patrick Lang | 27 November 2008 at 09:53 AM
Sebastien
Bienvenue chez les Anglo-Saxons.
John Balthazar's true name is Jean-Marie Balthazar d'Orgueil. He is a cousin of the Devereux family whose story is the river that flows through the books, including the first one. Balthazar is of the Army of Africa having spent much of his life with Tirailleurs Algeriens and Zouaves.
He is from the vicinity of Soturac in the Departement du Lot. His family's history is well known in those parts. His provenance is thoroughly described in this book if I can manage to get it done.
The Jesuit is an actual personage, one Hippolyte Gache, S.J. who did work in the Confederate hospital conplex in Lynchburg, Virgina. pl
Posted by: Patrick Lang | 27 November 2008 at 10:03 AM
Merry Thanksgiving Pat, Maureen and all the other happy campers at SST!
May your belts always be expandable and your recliners inclined to the great deity TV!
And thanks for the peek at your 2nd of this collection.
Reminds me in some ways of Louis L'Amour's works for the texture and the times.
As I've just completed re-reading L'Amour's entire collection for the nth time (started in the service and couldn't quit), I enjoy both the historical aspects as well as the narrative.
As I've aged, it has struck me more and more, just how little actual time has passed from that great American Tragedy, the War between the States, and my own life.
And the baggage we all still carry though many are unknowing, and perhaps worse, uncaring.
If you ever need an additional proofreader, twould volunteer in an instant!
Posted by: Mad Dogs | 27 November 2008 at 02:39 PM
Thank you Col. Lang, I appreciate this blog site...excellent.
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Posted by: Rhonda Hohmann | 27 November 2008 at 08:51 PM
My thanks for your welcome, Sir.
Are there books you would suggest on the American Civil War ? As I mentioned in my first post, "Battle Cry of Freedom" is the only notable one translated in French as far as I know, but I am a regular customer of a W.H.Smith import store (in fact, I'm thinking of buying "Battle Cry of Freedom" in the original language).
My thanks in advance.
Posted by: Sebastien | 28 November 2008 at 03:29 AM
Sebastien
We had Thanksgiving dinner last night in a little place here in Alexandria. It is the "Bistro Lafayette," a most excellent touch of France in this town. They have a website.
I would read; "The Civil War, a Narrative," by Shelby Foote, "The Killer Angels," by Michael Sharaa, and you might have a go at my own novel, "The Butcher's Cleaver."
Foote wrote extraordinarily well. "Limpid prose" is not an exageration in his case. He was both a novelist and a historian. His book is in three volumes and may have been translated. I am quite sure that Sharaa's Pulitzer prize novel has been translated. These are both in print and could be had at WH Smith. pl
Posted by: Patrick Lang | 28 November 2008 at 10:20 AM
Before "Battle Cry of Freedom" did any substantial histories of the Civil War (WBS) mention the impact of black soldiers on North and South and the ultimate result?
Posted by: William R. Cumming | 28 November 2008 at 11:21 AM
WRC
There has always been a lot of mention of everything in that most documented of wars. Things are not "discovered." They are merely remembered.
I don't think that
black troops in the Union army affected the outcome very much.
They were principally used for other than assault duties and often were relegated to guarding supply lines and the like. They were useful in freeing up white units for the butcher's work. The 54th Massachusetts' attack on Battery Wagner is a notable exception as was the Chaffin's Farm Battle east of Richmond in 1864. The Crater battle at Petersburg was, of course, a horrible debacle for them in which Billy Mahone's division counterattacked, massacred them in the crater itself and then shot a lot of prisoners on the spot. Interestingly, he was a Republican governor of Virginia after the war. The CG of the Black division in the Crater was a man named Ferraro or some such who was cowering in a bunker behind the lines while Mahone's wild men did them in. He should have been cashiered but was not. He was in fact promoted to Brevet Major General, USV. He was a Republican loyalist.
Confederate use of both free and slave Black auxiliaries is more rarely mentioned. It seems to have been taken for granted by the Confederates at the time. At Chaffin's Farm, Porter Alexander mentions in his memoirs that Confederate teamsters, cooks etc, pushed white soldiers out of the way to get the chance to shoot at Black Union Army troops, yelling "traitor" at them all the while.
After the war there were Black members of the UCV. There are a lot of photos of them at conventions and the former Confederate states paid them pensions. I don't suppose McPherson says much about them...
Man - "the glory, jest and riddle of the world." pl
Posted by: Patrick Lang | 28 November 2008 at 12:09 PM
A lot of American Chestnuts in the Eastern Forests during the civil war. Perhaps the most common tree before the chestnut blight of the early 20th Century. Great for the carvers on both sides in the war.
Posted by: William R. Cumming | 22 November 2011 at 06:15 PM
When I was young, I started reading a novel cycle by Gordon R. Dickson. Dickson passed before he could finish the cycle he planned. Given your previous appreciations of the harder science fiction, I suggest you might find this cycle respectable. The Childe Cycle http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Childe_Cycle . The first published book in the cycle, Dorsai, lost out to Starship Troopers by Heinlein for the 1960 Hugo.
Posted by: CK | 21 November 2012 at 03:39 PM
The Thanksgiving meal is a special occasion in the Army as all us old soldiers know. It is a time when us officers donned our dress whites (at least in the 25th Infantry Division) and spent time with the troops in the mess hall.
Stafford was the winter quarters of the Union Army that bloodied at Fredericksburg in 1862. There were more Union troops in Stafford that winter than there are Stafford residents today. The small soldier towns that so amazed Balthazar also sprang up in Stafford although the inhabitants wore blue rather than butternut and grey. These soldier towns are depicted in our White Oak Civil War Museum and our new Civil War Park.
http://www.whiteoakmuseum.com
http://www.fscws.org/Index.html
Posted by: The Twisted Genius | 21 November 2012 at 11:34 PM
Happy Thanksgiving to you all.
Posted by: Mark | 28 November 2013 at 10:17 AM
um, so how is Lola this Thanksgiving anyway?
Posted by: Charles I | 28 November 2013 at 04:57 PM
oh yeah now I recall (I imagine, may be completely wrong) but setting up this camp in the cold was complicated by the fact that all the loose bits of metal one might glom onto had long since been shot at the enemy, wasn't that detail in the book or am I just addled as usual?
Posted by: Charles I | 28 November 2013 at 05:02 PM